Q1: What’s your
suggestions to improve the scientific background and rationale for the
investigation being reported in the introduction section?
A:
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It is lacking data about AMR as a problem
right now (prevalence, mortality rate, etc), they only show the future burden
of the conditions. à They should present both actual burden
and potential burden.
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Not presenting clear correlation of
knowledge and practice of antibiotic use to actual AMR prevalence. à
They should give convincing evidence that knowledge and practice of antibiotic
use is affecting the actual case of AMR.
Q2: Is there any flaw(s) in the table 3 for the
interaction effect?
A:
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The wide 95% CI of “Interaction between
Knowledge of AMR and 35–49 Years Old” and “Interaction between Knowledge of AMR
and 21–34 Years Old”.
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Perhaps it is caused by very imbalance
data regarding “Knowledge of AMR”, as we know that only 3% of respondents were
considered having good knowledge.
Q3. Is there any flaw(s) in the table 4 (also in the
table5) for the interaction effect?
A:
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If only for the interaction effect it
seems no flaws, but when we see for each age group, we can see that some age
groups showed wide 95% CI. And it was getting wider as the age group being
younger.
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We should aware that younger respondents
tend to having inappropriate use of antibiotics. The author did not mention
specifically about this issue, they just focusing on the effect size.
Q4 If the authors got results from 18-49-year-old
female subjects indicated that good accessibility to primary care could reduce
the risk of self-medication (one of the inappropriate use of antibiotics),
please illustrate your potential explanation(s) with supportive references.
A:
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In that scenario, 18-49-year-old female having
less access (compared to male and older age groups) is contra-intuitive, as
female is assumed to be more time spent at home and older people tend to have
more limitation on healthcare access. And regarding the paper, the access to
primary care did not show as a problem, since most Singaporean get their
antibiotic from primary care.
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The potential explanation is more about
women’s mobility, regardless of age group.
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In the other setting, the explanation is
also including the funding, but only when it related to hospital, not primary
care since it involving intravenous antibiotic: “Patients who were female, aged
18 years or more (compared to those aged ≤5 years), received antibiotics
intravenously and received financial assistance from an insurance scheme were more likely to be prescribed antibiotics
inappropriately.”[1] It will be interesting to see the effect of health
insurance as explanatory factor of better access for 18-49-year-old female will
decrease the self-medication.
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“This trend is observable in the data for
HICs where lower education, less employment, and lower income leads to higher antibiotic use.
However, the opposite is true for data from LMICs.”[2] We should also
considering broader socioeconomic characteristic of the respondents to explain
the finding.
Q5 What are the policy implications?
A:
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Education on antibiotic should focused on
younger population.
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Since they mostly got the antibiotic from
GP clinic and polyclinic (83%), so the primary clinics should be the place of
promoting awareness about good antibiotic use and AMR.
Q6 Please provide at least two of your questions and
your suggestions and comments for each question.
A:
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Why the author set the cut-off point for “Knowledge
of AMR” too high (8 out of 8 question should be right answered to be considered
as “good”)? If they (at least) try to use different cut-off point, perhaps it
will give a different conclusion. It is perhaps the biggest flaw in this paper,
since only 3% of respondents were considered having good knowledge of AMR à
the proportion between groups were highly imbalance. The author did not mention
that they have tried something to solve this problem.
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Why they were not using the knowledge
score as continuous variables? Since there are no validated cut-off points for
Singaporean, it is better to also treat the knowledge variables as continuous
variables. The different approach with using the raw knowledge score without
categorization can show if any association was existing in more sensitive
manner.
References:
1. Chang,
Y., Chusri, S., Sangthong, R., McNeil, E., Hu, J., Du, W., Li, D., Fan, X.,
Zhou, H., Chongsuvivatwong, V. and Tang, L., 2019. Clinical pattern of
antibiotic overuse and misuse in primary healthcare hospitals in the southwest
of China. PLoS One, 14(6), p.e0214779.
2. Schmiege, D., Evers, M., Kistemann, T. and Falkenberg, T., 2020. What drives antibiotic use in the community? A systematic review of determinants in the human outpatient sector. International journal of hygiene and environmental health, 226, p.113497.
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